from the diagram we can know that most students agree to surf the Internet. Besides, half of the students are for eating snacks at school. Moreover, nearly all the students disagree to wear school uniforms to school every day.In my view, students should be allowed to eat snacks in the classroom, because they always feel hungry. If they don’t have enough food, they won’t concentrate more on their studies. In addition, I don’t agree to spend lots of time surfing the Internet. Most students can’t help playing computer games, so sometimes they forget to do their homework.In a word, students will study better if they have good habits. We did a survey about middle school student’s hobbies. Here are the results. As can be seen from the diagram, most students reach an agreement in surfing the internet. First, surfing the internet can broaden our vision and we can learn what we can’t learn at school. Secondly, it’s a good way for us to relax ourselves. Having facing so much stress, we do need to have some fun. However, this doesn’t mean that we can spend lots of time surfing the Internet, oppositely, we should use it in a good way so that it can benefit us.Moreover, although nearly all the students disagree to wear schools uniforms, I think we should. Because as students, our main mission is to study well, not just thinking about how to dress up ourselves all day. And wearing school uniforms helps us save the time that we may spend in choosing clothes so that we can concentrate more on our studies.All in all, no matter what kind of hobbies we have, we should be sure that it’s good for both our studies and lives. 六、提建议类范文Dear Tom,I’m really happy to hear from you, but I’m sorry to hear that you have some annoying problems. So don’t worry, I will try my best to help you.As for the weather, it’s always dry in Beijing, a good advice is to drink more water. You will get used to it. Well, about /Chinese, it’s really a problem for you. But fortunately, you are in the environment of Chinese, you should try to speak Chinese as much as possible and don’t be afraid of making mistakes. In that way, you’ll make progress. Being new here, I know it’s be afraid you. You’d better try to make as many friends as you can ,and if you feel lonely during the Anyway, remember, I’ll always be your best friend. Dear Tom,I’m delighted to write to you and I hope that my advice can help you some way.First of all, I’m sorry to hear that you feel uncomfortable because of the dry weather. However, I figure that eating more fruits, drinking more water can help you get out of that trouble. As for your language problem, why not consider joining a Chinese club where there are good Chinese native speakers? Communicating with them on any popular topic can be fun and good for your listening and oral Chinese. In addition, I know that it’s hard for someone to get on well with foreigners at first, but if you smile more to the people around you, your friends will surely show up!In a word, I do hope you can gradually get used to your new life. I’m looking forward to your good news! 七、变化对比类假设你是李明，
你的美国朋友杰克听说你校正在开展研究性学习，来信询问有关情况，请你写一封信，谈一谈开展研究性学习前后，你的学习情况的变化。注意：1用书信格式。2词数：80左右 3 生词：研究性学习exploring study。
过去
现在
课堂老师讲解知识点，学生听讲，记笔记。老师提出问题，学生互相讨论或学生自己提出问题自己讨论解决。
课后完成大量的作业。丰富多彩的课外活动，如读自己感兴趣的书籍，
去图书馆或上网查资料。
Dear Jack,How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in our school. In short, things have been improving since the school began to carry out exploring study. In the past, the teachers always kept on explaining the points in class. We students just listened and took notes. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raised by the teachers or ourselves. After class, we enjoyed different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read what we are interested in. We can go to the library or surf the Internet for various kinds of information.In a word, we are now masters of study, and we are happy.Best wishes.
Yours,Li Ming 中考书面表达评分标准
评分标准第一档(13 – 15)第二档(9 – 12)第三档(5 – 8)第四档(0 – 4)
内容要点要点齐全观点正确要点齐全观点正确要点不齐全部分内容符合题意与题目相关内容不多
句式词汇句式多样词汇丰富句式词汇基本满足要求句式词汇单调平乏简单拼凑句式词汇
语言表达的准确性个别错误为丰富语言而产生少量错误不影响理解错误较多影响理解内容难以理解
语言的连贯性( 逻辑)具有逻辑性
中考作文写作技巧
I．主题句1.
It’s necessary
important
common
﹜ for sb. to do sth.
difficult
impossible
enjoyable1.
It’s one’s duty to do …
II．
观点1.
I think … not only… but also…2.
I don’t think …3.
In my opinion, …
III．主旨内容1.
Here are my suggestions:
First of all , …
What’s more , …
Besides , …2.
As a student , I …I can do …as long as I ….in order to do …, I will do …I do … as much as possible.Because it… not only… but also ……so that…, which is the best …I can do
IV．结束语1.
The more…, the better…2.
Don’t you think this is …?3.
I’m sure that …4.
I believe that …5.
Don’t give up. It will be all right soon.
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