中考英语作文变通表达技巧系列
中考英语作文变通表达技巧系列1.英语作文变通表达技巧
英语作文中很多时候会遇到不会写的单词和不会表达的事物，通常通过两种方法来解决：
1，??如果遇到不会写的单词是一个集体性名词，我们可以这样变通一下。比如说 你不会写 “大众媒体”（mass medio），你可以说成： something used everyday by us，such as TV，newspaper，radio，computer etc。
如果遇到的会写的单词是个个别性名词，我们可以这样变通一下：如你不会写的单词是一氧化碳，二氧化碳。你可以说成是：poisonous gases，也就是它们的总称，都是有毒气体么。
2，??第二种方法其实还是“变通”表达，不过这中方法是对于不会表达某个句子的时候，但这个时候要注意一个问题是：你要将不会表达的那个句子，用更好的方式表达出来，也就是说当你不会做一个句子的表达时，你可以把它拆为多个句子，或者使用倒装，强调，虚拟语气等等，言外之意就是把本来不好表达的句子用更高明的手段替换，如果霸王硬上弓或者使用简单句来变通的话，写出来的东西必定很糟，而且即使你在变通的时候出现一些语法错误，那也是由于使用高难度的手法而致，评卷标准里说了，这样的错误是次要的。
3，??第三点一般不常见，适用于难度较高的考试，且适用于词汇量较大的同学。这个方法就是：“生造词”，但要注意，就是你所生造的词的长度最好包括前缀，词根和后缀，否合构词发的要求。而且跟你所要造的这个词在词根上与某些类似。这就注定你所编的词必须在10个字母左右，太长或过短都不合适！对于这样的词汇，评卷老师会当作没看见。还要注意一点，这样的词汇在作文中不要超过两个！不要去挑战阅卷人的心理承受底线！ 2.万能英语作文模板
（I）说明原因型
模块（一）
第一段：Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities . It is estimated that ( 1 ).
Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.
第二段：The first one is that ( 2 ) .Besides,( 3 ) . The third reason is ( 4 ).
最后一段：To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( 5 ) .
It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ,( 6 ).
On the other hand ,( 7 ). All these measures will certainly reduce the
number of XX .
注释：
（1）用具体数据说明XX现象
（2）原因一
（3）原因二
（4）原因三
（5）指出主要原因
（6）解决建议一
（7）解决建议二
Generation gap between parents and children
Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and
children which is so- called generation gap . It is estimated that (75 percentages
of parents often complain their children\'s unreasonable behavior while children
usually think their parents too old fashioned).
Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children?
Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows . The first one is that ( the two generations,
having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them) . Besides(due to having little in common to talk about , they are not willing to sit face to face ) . The third reason is (with the
pace of modern life becoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with their
work or study that they don\'t spare enough time to exchange ideas ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( lake of communication and understanding each other) .
It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing (children should
respect their parents ).On the other hand ,( parents also should show solicitue for
their children). All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap . 第二天：
（I）说明原因型
模块（2）
In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on ( 1 ).
The factors for ( 2 ) .First of all ,( 3 ).Then , there
comes a case that ( 4 ). Moreover , ( 5 ) . Especially
when ( 6 ) .
Indeed, these unique points can be collected theo remind
people that ( 7 ).In this way ,we should behave just like
( 8 ).
The impact of Television
In recent years , with the development of science and
technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite
TV , offering as many as 50 channels .It has caused a heated
debate on (the impact of television on children ). Many
parents are worried about the impact of so much television
on children.
The factors for (parents\' worry is that children are indulge in
television and spend too much time on it .) .First of all ,(with so
many programs to choose from , children are not getting as much
exercise as they should ).Then , there comes a case that ( some
studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions
of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ).
Moreover , ( the effect on children\'s minds are more serious than
the effect on children\'s bodies ) . Especially when ( the children
are too small to judge what programs are suit to them ) .
Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind
parents that ( they should pay close attention to and responsibilities
for supervising their children\'s TV viewing ).In this way ,children
will not be influented too deeply . （I）说明原因型
模块（3）
Currently,XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate
the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX .
It is clear that ( 1 ). If you ( 2 ), as a result ,
your dreams willcome true . On the contrary, if you ( 3 ).
Failure will be following with you .It turns out that all your plan falls through .
No one can deny another fact that ( 4 ) .You donn\'t have to
look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know ( 5 ) .
It will exert a profound influence upon ( 6 ).
With reference to my standpoint ,I think ( 7 ).
注释：
1 ： XX的第一个优点
2： 支持XX的做法
3：不支持XX的做法
4：XX的第二个优点
5：举例证明优点二
6：说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文：
The importance of self-confidence
Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day .
This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable
than self-confidence.
It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one\'s abilities ).
If you ( are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power
to play , arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome
difficulties ), as a result , your dreams willcome true .On the contrary,
if you ( have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that
you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following with you。
It turns out that all your plan falls through .
No one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light
when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed) .
You donn\'t have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect
that we all know (the secret of MMe.Curie lies in preserverence and
self-confidence, the latter in particular) . It will exert a profound
influence upon ( the achievement of one\'s ambitions ).
With reference to my standpoint ,I think (he that can have
self-confidence can have what he will). （I）说明原因型
模块（4）
For most of us today ,( 1 ).
From above ,we can find that the reasons
why ( 2 ) are as follows.
The primary reason ,i think, is ( 3 ).
Second,( 4 ).
The third reason, actually ,is ( 5 ).
The significance for ( 6 ) 。
Therefore ,( 7 ).
注释：
（1）人们针对XX的态度和举措
（2）归纳现状
（3）第一个原因
（4）第二个原因
（5）第三个原因
（6）重申造成现状的最重要原因
（7）我的建议我写的模块（４）的相应的作文，仅供参考
pollution
most of us today (recognize that environmental pollution has
been a greatly serious problem . lots of plants trees corps are
destroyed by bad air .many fish die of poisonous water . thousands
of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas . therefore ,
environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases
that are disabling ,or bringing death not only to human beings ,
but also to wild life .)
from above ,we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted
more and more seriously) are as follows.
the primary reason ,I think , is (the reason of harmful substances into
environment . for example ,to prevent insects ,farmers make use of great
amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests . however ,they
pollute air ,water and land ).
second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make
environment polluted badly ).
the third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in
the world . everyday , so much litter and waste are poured out from
houses ,also pollute the environment ).
the significance for (controlling pollution ) noted that it\'s high
time that more effective measures should be taken .
therefore ,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants
from factories . moreover ,in the households ,there is an obvious need
to reduce litter and waste . let\'s make our good efforts ,and the world
will be a safer place to live for us ). （I）说明原因型
模块（5）
These days we often hear that ( 1 ).
It is common that ( 2 ).
Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social
protects? For one thing ,( 3 ).
For another,( 4 ). What is more,
since ( 5 ),it is natural that ( 6 ).
To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth
trying .We should do something such as ( 7 )
to improve he present situation ,and i do believe everything
will be better in the future .
(1)提出论题
（2）说明现状
（3）理由一
（4）理由二
（5）理由三
（6）理由三引起的后果
（7）解决方法
我写的模块（5）的相应的作文
pollution of environment
These days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed .).
Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing ,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more , since ( the industrial revolution ) ,it is natural
that (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms .The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment ).
To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worthying .We should do something such as (planting more trees , equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the present situation ,and i do believe everything will be better in the future .
作文的开头
作文的开头一篇文章通常可分为三个部分，即开头、正文和结尾。这三个部分安排是否得体，直接影响到文章的质量。 文章的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山，用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题，使读者了解文章要谈论什么，一下于引起读者的兴趣。 作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种： 1．开门见山，揭示主题 文章一开头，，就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是： I Spent my last vacation happily． 下面是题为"Honesty"(谈诚实)一文中的开头： Honesty is one of the best virtues．An honest man is always trusted and respected．On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar"，and is looked upon by honest people． 2．交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头 在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游)的开头： The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us. 3. 回忆性的开头 用回忆的方法来开头。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的开头是： I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday. 4．概括性的开头 即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头： People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power. 5．介绍环境式的开头 即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是: It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner. 6．交待写作目的的开头。 在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如通过文章要表扬谁，批评谁，或说明一个什么问题等。如 "Pollution Control" (控制污染)的开头： In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control 3.英语的万能作文
开头万能公式
1． 开头万能公式一：名人名言
有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！
原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？
经典句型：
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” （适用于已记住的名言）
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言）
更多经典句型：
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2． 开头万能公式二：数字统计
原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：
Honesty：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型：
A recent statistics shows that …
结尾万能公式
1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论
说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：
Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！
更多过渡短语：
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型：
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？
更多句型：
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken. 写作的“七项基本原则”
一、 长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！
强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、 主题句原则
国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！
特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、 一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）
2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）
3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）
4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）
8）most important of all, moreover, finally
9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）
10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）
建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！
四、 短语优先原则
写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.
这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。
五、 多实少虚原则
原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如：
走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room
所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！ 六、 多变句式原则
1）加法（串联）
都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短语可以用：
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2）转折（拐弯抹角）
批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短语：
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3）因果（so, so, so）
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语：
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）
有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。
举例：This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：
When to go, Why he goes away…
5）附加（多此一举）
如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6）排比（排山倒海句）
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. （气势恢宏）
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！
七、 挑战极限原则
既然是挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！
原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！
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